My Dream Job (first draft)

   out line

since my child hood i dreamed to be ateacher

when iwas young i adore using chalks in writing                

i used to hold my teccher's stick and act like my teaccher when mt teacher go out for any reason

 i was very happy when i knew that am going to  enter the faculty.

 i adore the day of teaching practice.

Education System Now And In The Past (final draft)

 Since our creation we are odered to educate because we are the highest kind of the living organisms.althought in the past there were alot of people illiterate. now adays the world developed. Technology becomes amain part of our daily live.No doubt it also affects our educational system.

     Many years ago, education was very difficult.Students have to travel in order to educate because schools are not available in every where .teachers use only chalks and black board.Also teachers use only simple teaching aids.Finally,students just use pencils abd papers.

     Nowadays,education is very easy.Schools are available in every where.Teachers can use computers instead of the black or white board to explain the lesson.Teachers can use complex teaching aids like vedio films.Finally students can write their lessons on their lap top or on note book as they used to do in the past.

    To sum up, educational system developed deeply .It is affected by the technological revolution .Students are no longer obligated to use pencil and paper .Teachers can use computers to explain their lessons.

Education System Now And In The Past (first draft)

Out Line:-

Introduction ,one paragragh five lines each

we are created to educate

allah ordered us to educate because we are the highest kind of living orgamisms

thier is technology now aday

every day this technology developed and affect on many aspects of our lives

no doubt that technology affects on the development of education 

Body two paragraghs ,five lines each

the first paragragh

in the past education was very difficult

students have to travel in order to learn because schools are not available in every where

teachers only use the black board and chalks

teachers use very simple teaching aids

students only use pencils and papers

secound paragragh

nowadays education is very easy

schools available in every where

teachers can use computer to write his lesson

teachers can use complex and advanced teaching aids like vedio films

students have many methods to write thier lesson

concluction 5lines one paragragh

education is affected deeply by technology  

Spinster Girls In The Arab World

                

 For many years ,The arab world is aplace for freedom. Althought there are some problems which that    restrict the liberty of it's people ,one of these problems is spinster.It  is a legal term for an unmarried woman, aged 38 or over.It is an international phenomenon but it does not represent an issueexcept in the Arab world. Many girls aged under thirty decided to be spinsters.As any arguementive issue spinster between girls  has its supporters and opposers

 The supporters of this phenomenon -usually from  girls-have thier own reasons . Firstly, they think that marriage is not important as long as the girl can affort her expenses.Secoundly thay think that being spinster means living alife without hard responsibilities .Thirdly ,they think that they are not ready to marry and bring up children.Finally , they think that marriage life will affect badly on thier vocational life and may be they will be forced to leave thier jobs.

The opposers of this phenomenon -usually from parents - have thier own reasons . Firstly.thay think that females are naturally weak and cannot afford life hard ships alone .Secoundly they think that marriage is apart of our life cycle in addition of being the reason for our creation.thirdly they think that girls are created just to marry and bring up children. Finally , they think that the only reason that makes agirl leave her parents is marriage.

To sum up, spinster is not aninternational problem but its an arabian one. this is because of arabs  customs    . and traditions in addition to the economical and unemployment  issues  However girls can balance between marriage and raising up kids.they can spend the first six or seven years after universty graduation unmarried. During these years she can work and complete her study if she wants.If the this  solution is  applied girls will gain experians and they will be wise wives.   

Causes and Effects of Pollution in Egypt (final draft)



Their are  many sources for pollution around the world ,but man's greed is the main source of this

phenomenon . Their are also many types of  pollution  such as air pollution ,water pollution and noise pollution. .   Presumedly, it affects our health badly,as it causes the death of many people every year.Unfortunately Egypt  suffers from all kinds of pollution except nuclear pollution ,because the majority of egyptian do not know the dangerous effects of pollution on their health. Noise pollution is one of the most dangerous types of pollution in our country because of many bad   habits  , customs and traditions in our society.

   

         Their are many sources for noise pollution in Egypt. Firstly the unbearable  sound of cars and buses horns in traffic jam especially  during rush hours .Secondly,sound of the street sellers  who call nearly  around the clock with their ugly voice in order to sell  their  goods . Thirdly ,children who  live in random areas  spend most of the day playing  games that makes  noisy sounds , either with fire works or  foot ball. Fourthly ,people who walk in the street or ride motor cycles  listening to music with extremely high sound. Finally, wedding festivals that  takes place in the street .The  organisersThese kind of festivals  use  about three of four huge speakers that disturb the  inhabitants of   the area in which the festival takes place.

      Based on the above mention, noise pollution affects our health badly. Firstly,it affects our mental health,people  these days  became nervous than any time before.Secoundly, it is one of the main sources which  that causes the increase of man's heart beats, that's  why the number of heart patients increase every month  .Thirdly,noise pollution is the main source of partial deaf as it causes the corruption forthe cells our inner ear   . Finally, it is responsible for the decrease of man's concentration especially in big cities.  

       consequently,noise pollution can cause mass genocide for the egyptian society.Every year many egyptian people become closer to death because  of noise pollution. we can not deny that our lives changes to the worst because of loud sounds that we hear daily.  The only solution for this problem is to get rid of our  deadly habits and  customs in order to live longer and healthy.

Causes and Effects of Pollution in Egypt (out line

Causes and Effects Of Polllution in Egypt

Introduction(1paragraph,4lines

there are many sourses for pollution 

pollution affects our health badly

there are many kinds of pollution inegypt

 pollution in egypt

noise pollution is one of many dangerous kinds of pollution in Egypt 

body (2paragraphes,5lines each

the first paragraph

sourses of noise pollution(controlling idea

hornes of cars

street sellers

boyes playing in the street

festivals that people make in the street

the secound paragraph

effects of noise pollution(controlling idea

affects mental health

causes heart problems

inceasing inthe boold pressure

causes difficulty in hearing

conclution(1paragraph ,4lines

there are many kinds of pollution

alot of people may lose there hearing because of noise pollution

people must improve thier behavoiurs and start acting in civilizing manner

all  the people have the right to live healthy

Causes and Effects of Pollution in Egypt

        Thier are  many sources for pollution around the world ,but man's greed is the main source of this phenomenon . Thier are also many types of  pollution  such as air pollution ,water pollution and noise pollution. .   Presumedly, it affects our health badly,as it causes the death of many people yearly. Unfortuntly Egypt suffers from all kinds of pollution except nucular pollution ,because the majority of egyptian do not know the dangerous effects of pollution on  man's health.Noise polution is one of the most dangerous types of pollution in our country because of many bad  habites , customs and traditions in our society.

   

         Thier are many sources for noise pollution in Egypt. Firstly the unbearable  sound of cars and buses horns in   atraffic jam espcially  during rush hours .secoundly,sound of the street sellers  who call nearly  around the clock with thier ugly voice in order to sel thier goods . Thirdly ,children who  live in random areas  spend most of the day playing  games that makes  noisy sounds , either with fire works or  foot ball. Finally ,people who walk in the street or ride motor cycles  listening to muic with extremly high sound. Finally, wedding festivals that  takes place in the street . These kind of festivals organisers use  about three of four huge speakers that disturbe the habitants of   the area in which the festival takes place.

      Based on the above mentioned, noise pollution affects our health severly. Firstly,it affects our mental health,people now adays became nervous than any time before.Secoundly, it is one of the main sources which lead to the increse of man's heart beats, thats why the number of heart paitants increase every month  .Thirdly,noise pollution is the main source of partial deaf as it causes the corruption of our inner ear cells  . Finally, it is responsible for the decrease of man's concentration especially in big cities.  

       consequently,noise pollution can cause mass genocide for the egyptian society.Every year many egyptian people become close to death because of noise pollution. we can not deny that our lives changes to the worest becaues of loud sounds that we hear daily.  The only solution for this problem is to get rid of our  deadly habites and  customs in order to live longer and healthy.